that one is nice... and third one also
the second one is weird... the gray band used as separation between the pictures is ugly i think
you got interesting ideas, even if the result show you need practice keep it up
i don't like the cut part on the left... i would have left the object in totallity
also, it would be more interesting compositionwise to have on object more upward and the other one more downward

like the contrast added by the red in the second one... but like blackshad i dont like the gray band... try that one again with something white inbetween and also better light

The red BG look very good and works really well. As it has been said before, I would go for a different crop, maybe a bit more space on the left part. This is my favourite from all the 3. Nice work.

what to say....agree with above...

I like version3 more.

First version: +7

• I like the composition for this one. The cut off picture works nicely for the concept, but the cut off camera doesn't. I didn't even know what it was until I viewed the other versions. A bit of overexposure going on here as well.

Second Version: +4

• I can tell that it's a camera better than I could in the first one, but the diptych setup doesn't work here for me. The grey band separating the images is a bit distracting and the sepia portrait doesn't fit the "style" of the photo of the camera.

Third Version: +10

• This is the stand out of the three. The cropping works very well to push the concept. The best of the three in my opinion.

+I don't know. I don't think I could vote on this right now because clearly I like the 3rd version more. So, send me a message if you change this to the 3rd version or upload the 3rd version on a seperate date.

Cheers!

I am not a big fan of the red background.
Would have tried a bw composition all together.

3rd is nice too.

I really like the contrast and colors in this piece. The DOF is interesting too. My only concern is that using a large aperature, you've not quite highlighted a central subject! I think the lens up front could be more centered and more in focus, while keeping the rest of the image out of focus. I think that would work a bit better.

Tommyguns

hmm..maybe because of exposure compensation -2? don't know, it's my first dslr camera and it's pretty new..still playing with preferences..